ext_83770 ([identity profile] monamour-x.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] behindthec 2008-12-18 08:20 pm (UTC)

hey sweetie. gonna go re-read this and comment. btw, i sent you an email, but didn't see your attachment at first, so then i sent another one. *facepalm* embarrassing...but, thats why you'll have two of them, if you are wondering.

commenting as I go:

The first time Brendon drinks, he gets sick. The second time, he gets naked.
*sigh* to be friends with him...that would be amazing. but, anyway, this made me LOL.

BILVY IS A CAT! YEESSSSSSSSSSS. omg i love you for putting that in there. :)

"And I purr," he adds to Brendon's rambling mess of descriptors.
"Liar. Haven't seen it."
"That," Tom interjects suddenly in a struggle to help Mike drunk-tune his guitar, looking up to set huge baby-blues on Brendon, "is because it only happens when he's fucking."

NDSFHDISOFSDFHIDSNFODNSOFINOSDFN I WANT BILVY TO PURR FOR MEEEEE!!! you make me want him so hard. more than usual. which is a lot. trust me.

Brendon glances between them and loves alcohol.
"I love alcohol," he announces.

THAT SO HAPPENS WHEN YOU ARE DRUNK!! hahahahahaha i loved that.

HAHAHAHA ryan so IS a martyr. <33

"I'm afraid I'm one of a kind," Brendon sighs, rolling onto his stomach and resting his head on Bill's narrow thigh.
"That you are, puppy," Bill agrees, stroking long, lazy lines down his back. "That you are."

THIS IS SO CUTE! brendon/bilvy have always been a favorite pairing of mine, because they are so GODDAMNED CUTE together. like...of course ryden is my favorite, and then realistically shane/bden, but after that i think i would say that bden goes really well with bill. they are so...djfidsfjipdsnfd good together? i don't know how else to describe it.

"You have such a great ass, Brenny Bear," Bill announces dreamily, pressing his hand down to cup one cheek. "I kinda just want to spank it."
HIS ASS! COLINNNNNNNNN MY WEAKNESS, MUCH??? i swear you do these things on purpose. ;) *cuddles you* i like it.

Suddenly Ryan bolts from the couch and leaves the bus without a word, a sound, a glance back. Brendon's the only one who seems to notice, so he pretends he doesn't.
RYANN! :( OH NO. POOR BABY!! *pets* i feel really bad for him in this fic...like, i know he's all shy and awkwardy about bden (like when he got the hard-on) but he's just introverted about his feelings, thats it! like, with the heart in the last chapter? he hides his feelings (behind bden's hair, apparently) you know? i kind of just want to squish him and tell him its all gonna be okay. :(

"Can I fuck you?"
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sorry, i would comment more but my brain has just shut down.

p.s. i loved how you tied in the "impudent" thing from the spencer kink.
p.p.s. is bilvy in any more of the kinks? *crosses fingers*
p.p.p.s. i love how bill calls bden "puppy."
p.p.p.p.s. I LOVE HOW RYAN GETS HIM COFFEE TO MAKE THE HANGOVER BETTER BUT DIDN'T WANT HIM TO KNOW! (that was why, right? lol thats how i took it at least.)
p.p.p.p.p.s. i love you. <3

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