behindthec: (grammar whoredom)
Colin ([personal profile] behindthec) wrote2009-03-18 01:04 pm

i just hope the plastic bags caught it.

look at the sentence i almost just wrote.

Footsteps climb the stairs, and a rustling of plastic grows loud enough for Brendon to identify as shopping bags, before Ryan's shuffling into the room, releasing his load on the floor.

 
and then that wasn't enough, so we had to discuss it.

Sophie:  bahahahaa
ha
 me:  faaaaaaaaaaail
 Sophie: 
i love that he shuffles in and just does it
lol
 me:  LOL YES
"well, here i am.  *comes*"
 Sophie:  exactly
but he's shuffling, so it's like emo somehow
 me:  LOL!!!!
 Sophie:  like *sigh* *comes*
 me:  LOL!!!
 Sophie:  only Ryan would come emo

so, so true.

i lied; chapter 5 should be up tomorrow.

[identity profile] hug-a-hippo.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahahahhahahah!
oh my goodness...just. you should have left it in and waited to see who would notice :D
but ahah thanks for the wierd image now. i will never think of shopping bags in the same way again XD

[identity profile] bunniesontoast.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
argument for amusement:
ryan uses shopping bags as condoms b/c of his monstercock.

[identity profile] hug-a-hippo.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
you know it ;)

[identity profile] lolab.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
heeee, right? now everyone's going to read the revised one and be all "HAHAHA LINE".

[identity profile] hug-a-hippo.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
lol that is exactly what I did! :D
psychic much?