I really suck at checking out new stories, but thank god this was recced and I found it. And I am more than glad I jumped on board this early on, and I spent this morning catching up. It took a while because, ahem, PAIN. I had to take breaks when Tom was dying, three lines, a break to calm myself and wipe my eyes, three lines, break, three, break, three. So far, the way you described Tom and Jon's relationship has broken my heart the most (but my heart likes that, and oh I see you hinting at Joncer there which makes me sort of very, very happy).
Your descriptions of emotions are so fucking well done. I am drooling to see the psychological development when they are trapped on an island (wow, I sound like a nerd), how their feelings change and ahem, yes, I saw the GSF in the pairings so my mind is all, HELLO, GSF, LET'S MAKE OUT. I am intrigued to see how we get there. And now Ryan is awake, thank god. There are a thousand ways the plot could go from here, which is something I really love. It shows how much depth this has, how multi-layered this is.
And this comment is beginning to look like a novel, so... lol, that's me done for now. I can't wait for more.
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Date: 2008-08-13 07:33 am (UTC)Your descriptions of emotions are so fucking well done. I am drooling to see the psychological development when they are trapped on an island (wow, I sound like a nerd), how their feelings change and ahem, yes, I saw the GSF in the pairings so my mind is all, HELLO, GSF, LET'S MAKE OUT. I am intrigued to see how we get there. And now Ryan is awake, thank god. There are a thousand ways the plot could go from here, which is something I really love. It shows how much depth this has, how multi-layered this is.
And this comment is beginning to look like a novel, so... lol, that's me done for now. I can't wait for more.