how are you so fucking talented? how? i just can't get over it. i can't...i can't do it.
so, like. let's try to react properly to this, okay? okay. here i go:
your descriptions. now, see, this is where i really see the filmmaker in you come alive. its the same in pwf...you create these visuals and i can actually vividly see what is going on in my head. that is a rare thing for writers and that brings me back to me first coherent, not baby, comment: how are you so talented? the details! the word choice and the emotion and everything--is beyond incredible, bby. <3
It's his other hand that's commanding the attention, though, gripped around a small, trapezoid-shaped blade as the tip disappears into the pristine flesh of his inner thigh, leaving a thin red trail in its wake -- not deep, just enough to draw out a reaction. i just loved that. it really stuck out to me, idk. *shrugs* its a perfect example of your descriptions though, fuck.
okay, so now about the kink:
i loved how you started it off, with talking about the irony of the line in camisado. just...loved it. idk. its really fitting, thats for sure. <3
i love how he got PISSED at brendon, first, because that is SO something ryan would do in that situation. but, embarrassed!ryan! eeeep! i just wanted to squish him and make it all go away. he cried. COLIN! you made him CRY. you can't DO that to me!!!! i actually clawed at the screen, because i wanted so badly to crawl in there and hug my bby. :( okay, freaky, i just got this mental image of samara in the ring crawling through the tv and it freaked me out.
oops, sorry, h.o. i gotta go watch my bby brother for a minute.
okay, i don't know why i told you that but whatever, i'm back. where was i? oh yes:
Ryan's head drops a little further, but he remains still. "Don't tell anyone." RYANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN. the end.
of course brendon would come so hard that he had to catch it all before it hit the floor when he was jerking of to thinking about ryan. *nods head* trufax.
HAHAHAHA YESSSSSSS. WIN. THE LIST--IT HAS BEEN MADE!!!! *pounds fist in air*
wow...long comment. but really, when do i ever leave SHORT ones? lol. whatever, you love it. because i am cute. :DDDDD
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Date: 2008-12-14 06:46 pm (UTC)how are you so fucking talented? how? i just can't get over it. i can't...i can't do it.
so, like. let's try to react properly to this, okay? okay. here i go:
your descriptions. now, see, this is where i really see the filmmaker in you come alive. its the same in pwf...you create these visuals and i can actually vividly see what is going on in my head. that is a rare thing for writers and that brings me back to me first coherent, not baby, comment: how are you so talented? the details! the word choice and the emotion and everything--is beyond incredible, bby. <3
It's his other hand that's commanding the attention, though, gripped around a small, trapezoid-shaped blade as the tip disappears into the pristine flesh of his inner thigh, leaving a thin red trail in its wake -- not deep, just enough to draw out a reaction.
i just loved that. it really stuck out to me, idk. *shrugs* its a perfect example of your descriptions though, fuck.
okay, so now about the kink:
i loved how you started it off, with talking about the irony of the line in camisado. just...loved it. idk. its really fitting, thats for sure. <3
i love how he got PISSED at brendon, first, because that is SO something ryan would do in that situation. but, embarrassed!ryan! eeeep! i just wanted to squish him and make it all go away. he cried. COLIN! you made him CRY. you can't DO that to me!!!! i actually clawed at the screen, because i wanted so badly to crawl in there and hug my bby. :(
okay, freaky, i just got this mental image of samara in the ring crawling through the tv and it freaked me out.oops, sorry, h.o. i gotta go watch my bby brother for a minute.
okay, i don't know why i told you that but whatever, i'm back. where was i? oh yes:
Ryan's head drops a little further, but he remains still. "Don't tell anyone."
RYANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN. the end.
of course brendon would come so hard that he had to catch it all before it hit the floor when he was jerking of to thinking about ryan. *nods head* trufax.
HAHAHAHA YESSSSSSS. WIN. THE LIST--IT HAS BEEN MADE!!!! *pounds fist in air*
wow...long comment. but really, when do i ever leave SHORT ones? lol. whatever, you love it. because i am cute. :DDDDD