squee! thank you so much. it's actually interesting the way that line worked, because i originally intended it to just be a mystery, like for gabe to never figure out what the end of the sentence was - and then as i was finishing the chapter it just hit me, the way it hit gabe, i was like, oh my GOD, *that was* the sentence; there was no more to it.
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Date: 2008-03-16 08:16 pm (UTC)so it stuck. ;)