Mmhm, yeah, I really like the Spyro thing now. He's not falling in love, and they don't have sex, but they do enough that there's this idea in the back of his head, hidden and crushed and trampled down almost to dust, that sex (and associated stuff) could theoretically be good, enough to make it worth trying when Brendon comes along and finally gets his trust.
Jon. Hmmmmmmmm. Well, Jon could be what finally helps them escape at the end...maybe he's been trying to help them the whole time, but it's been impossible without essentially forfeiting his own life, but seeing them at the end, seeing Brendon almost broken, seeing what Ryan would do for him, he can't let them suffer anymore, and he sacrifices his own freedom to help them escape, runs away with them, knowing he's as marked as they are now, but knowing it's worth it. And they all live happily ever after :P Idk :P
Yeah, eight years is a lot of time to fill with worlds. The first year is all sort of intro I guess, becoming a slave, etc. The second year could be the first brothel he's sold into, sold as a musician for a cheap, seedy stripshow but seen for his ~potential and... Then somehow he gets sold to Spencer's family? Then he has to get sold from there to somewhere really harsh. And from there maybe to the cabaret? Or somewhere else in between? Idk.
Crap, it's like 3, I actually need to go to bed, but totally more flaily brainstorming tomorrow! XD
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Date: 2009-04-16 05:08 pm (UTC)Jon. Hmmmmmmmm. Well, Jon could be what finally helps them escape at the end...maybe he's been trying to help them the whole time, but it's been impossible without essentially forfeiting his own life, but seeing them at the end, seeing Brendon almost broken, seeing what Ryan would do for him, he can't let them suffer anymore, and he sacrifices his own freedom to help them escape, runs away with them, knowing he's as marked as they are now, but knowing it's worth it. And they all live happily ever after :P Idk :P
Yeah, eight years is a lot of time to fill with worlds. The first year is all sort of intro I guess, becoming a slave, etc. The second year could be the first brothel he's sold into, sold as a musician for a cheap, seedy stripshow but seen for his ~potential and... Then somehow he gets sold to Spencer's family? Then he has to get sold from there to somewhere really harsh. And from there maybe to the cabaret? Or somewhere else in between? Idk.
Crap, it's like 3, I actually need to go to bed, but totally more flaily brainstorming tomorrow! XD